Wednesday, May 24, 2006

Letter-8

The candle was giving light for the last few minutes of itz life... so priya passed Subir another candle... then started telling her thoughts about the letter... she was travelling in some other world when she starts the story...

Ashim a nice boy.... Loved sneha.. they were engaged... ashim thought that after marriage they'll settle in USA.... Life was not a roller coster ride for him... but sneha on the other hand was poll apart... life is not only a roller soater but also pains & troubles were there... one day sneha came here in sikkim for an excursion with old friends... after 2 dayz ashim reached there... without informing sneha... he wanted to give a surprise... &

It was 6pm of evening... Sneha was tired... the day was beautiful... the ruins of sikkim... the forest... & .... Suddenly her thoughts interrupted by a phone call... she saw local no...

Sneha- hi...

Ashim- hello darling... how are you? Howz ur day?

Sneha- ashim!!!!!!!

Ashim- surprise surprise.... I'm coming to your room tonight.... Room no 329 na?

Sneha- okk... yaa... but...

Ashim- come on... don't worry... I just wanna meet you... nothing else...

Sneha- okk...ashim please...don't get the wrong idea of me...

Ashim- see you at 8pm sharp... bbye...

And he hung up the phone...

That evening was nice... ashim came with some great gifts... sneha wanted him to meet her friendz with whome she came... but ashim didn't want that... at 9:30 suddenly he asked "sneha, are you happy?"

Sneha- what? I'm going to marry you ashim.. & whatz the crap yaar?

Ashim- No tell me... you are happy na?

Sneha- ashim itz late... I think you need to sleep now... it seems you are getting mad... now go......

The next morning... sneha when sneha came outside... the receptionist deliver this mail to her....

Sneha,

I don't know how to tell you all these... but I think itz the high time to take this decision... I am going to US next week... before that I'll go to pune day after... sneha... I always knew that you've a past.. ya everyone does... nothing wrong in it... but you never said a single word about it... yesterday... I was travelling in the ruins... it was awesome... but it reveals some truth to me... I saw your best friend... soham is your best friend na? & I realised he is the one... you never talked about him much... but I realised the reason... I don't know what happened between both of you... but what I experienced yesterday... from there I can draw only one conclusion if you marry me... no one will be happy... & soham expressed his love to you... when you are not married... we are only engaged... & I am gonna break our engagement...

I could never saw the love from you which I have for you... but I am not complaining... you were always so caring... so loving... but I was never able to become your love... I wlways tried to become your best friend... but I never succeeded... & today I know the reason...

And sneha... sometimes life gives us no 2nd chance... & you are lucky... you got the chance... you got the person who loves you... who knows you... who is your best friend... accept the truth sneha... not everyone is as lucky as you are...

This is my last letter to you... I am leaving India soon... with no hard feelings... but with memories of those nice & sweet moments I shared with you... I'll keep them to myself all my life... & will be your well wisher...

Best of luck for your future...

I think we won't meet each other again... coz I'll leave this hotel within 8am...

So, check the envelope there you'll find the engagement ring... I want to make you free...

Bbye...

Take care...

Kunal

Vicky- priya!!!!

Priya- aarg sorry... I mean Ashim... aah...subir can you please pass me the water?

Subir- yaa sure...

And everyone became silent...

Time was flowing... no one of them knows how long they were sitting there unmoved...

Suddenly Vicky stood up & ask avi... hey you idiot... may I know whatz happening between both of you??? Oh you are such an idiot... I always knew about the fact that you both share feel for each other... but now... I am sure... & priya... don't you ever dare to talk to me... first wipe off your tears... & just tell me... if kunal was here... why didn't you tell us?? Not fair...

Priya stood up & went to the terrace...

Subir was never that close to priya... but he followed priya....

Subir- priya... kunal is right... life gives you a second chance... accept it...

Priya- Subir, you know nothing... think about my family... & what about avi? Can't he express his love once?

Subir- oh avi is an idiot... but atleast he said this before your marriage na? And we are all with you... so we'll talk to uncle & aunty if you can't manage them...

Priya- hmm... thanks...

Subir- hey... itz okk... but priya if avi never expressed his feelings... you also did the same na? You were busy in your own life with loads of boy friends... he was busy in his own life with his share of girl friends...

Priya- but...

Subir- no if's & but's... you both are great idiots... you never look into your own minds... you two just did all these to make each other jealous... but if any of you had brains then instead of doing all these you should've express your love... & here comes the lover boy...

Avi came silently.... & Subir went with a twinkling smile on his face...

Avi- pri...

Pri- shut up...

Avi –will you marry me??

Pri- what about your other girl friends?????

Avi- even you'll break so many hearts... & right now if we don't get inside of the hotel I am sure both of us will freeze...

They came inside.....

Vicky give a glance to all and said but guys now can we please open the letter????? If all problems have been resolved???

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa (everyone with a shout)

& Vicky opened the letter...

To be contd......

16 comments:

dwaipayan said...

well, the post is ok,,.but a kuch kuch hota hain touch is clearly evident...

Euphoric Dreamer said...

the story has been nicely weaved forward !Keep it up !

Arz000n said...

You also turned into a story writer...kya baat hai...
and this is a fundoo one...

waiting for the 2nd part...

Btw, agaer mujhe pata hota..toh main akele nahi jaata goa mein ;)

The Lord of the Strings said...

luvd it

Anonymous said...

luvd it really... the author fwd the story really in a nice way.... njoyed reading it... most njoyable post on this story...

Abhirup Chakrabarty said...

Awesome!!read all the 8 letters at one go tonite..just can't wait for the next letter!!!@Nabanita:-I kinda expected that kinda story from priya(lucky me,i guessed that rite[;)])It was nice & enjoyable,with a tinge of simplicity..go on with the story...really awesome work u all!!hats off!!

Rimjhim Sen said...

read the story... till not completed i guess.. but u guys r awesome... keep it up... & @Euphoric dreamer- ur 2nd post is very nice...

@Nabanita- girl u take my heart... the last post is mind blowing... simple...but really touchy... the dilemma of the was really njoyable... u put ur soul into priya...from the last comment i think there is some background behind this character priya...nice one...u deserve a round of applause...
& nabanita i also checked ur own blog when i clicked on ur name... from the 1st 2 post i can understand...how did u make the character priya so realistic...
best of luck for ur future...
best of luck to ur effort

diabolic preacher said...

if you're CC licensing your work then why don't you allow copying and redistributing verbatim copies of your work. there are no conditions in the license (for that matter in any CC license that exists) that restricts copying of work.

don't disrespect the openness of the license.

diabolic preacher said...

blog comment ka reply blog pe hi hiya toh achchha hai...

...anyways, first of all we need to ask you for what? CC allows distribution by default...so why ask?
Secondly your license doesn't force the user to redistribute under the same terms.

It still is not clear, why would you want to use a license that you're not comfortable with. is it a 'cool' factor?

Moumita said...

hey this was my friend who wrote this part...
@naba- hey really cool man...i luvd reading it...i knew that something like this will happen to priya...(friends don't get shocked)
naba itz like ur own story na???
anywyz collage... keep going..ahem...

Moumita said...

sorry guys 2nd comment... did he read this???

Euphoric Dreamer said...

The idea of using CC licensing is to authorize our work as original and just remind people about the fact we do not support PLAGARISM !!

Dilip said...

wow....nice piece...these two posts suddenly raised the standard of this blog...kudos to u...i love this part...coz its simple & sweet...&emotional...

Shubhasree said...

i luvd it...@naba from where does this emotions come from? i know itz origin...
anywez...really nice one...
keep it up collage...

Shubhasree said...

oh i just forgot... i've done 1 thing... informed him about this blog...look... i am advertising this blog...i am gud na?

Nabanita said...

sree can't reply u here...but plz don't do anything that hurts any1...will talk to uabout it later...now xam is there...& thnx for visiting our blog...